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Thursday 16 August 2018

Taxel's Comeback

We start with Taxel having ideas for the castle and he had the best idea he had so he started for the castle he had a bigger trapper and signs. Maxel was waiting behind the trees watching Taxel so he went to get Spider to eat this mess so Maxel and Spider creeped into the castle and Wolfy followed but… “-ZIP-” Wolfy was grabbed by the trap, Spider used his rope to launch himself to Wolfy and Maxel pulled the rope and… “,,Boom,, -Cut-” and Wolfy was saved but Taxel and Pak’n’fame came and trapped them in cage so Maxel ran into the castle but good thing Wolfy had a plan. He was going to bite and Spider used his webs to grab a camera and watched Maxel running in the halls and the Taxel came out of nowhere and slashed Maxel but with the power of the katana… “-Slash-” and the castle started to crumble so Maxel dashed out of the castle and then things were back to normal but did they.

Thursday 9 August 2018

Maxel's Adventure

Dylan The GoTherwTime Monkey


Dylan was in the jungle and it was starting to rain he was running as fast as he can go to find a big leaf to sleep in and fand a another leaf to hide his face and… “ZZZZZZZZZZZZ” said Dylan but when he woke up he saw people putting him in something and then it look like he was zooming around space and then he was in a old town that look familiar but he cant put his finger on it but he wanted to go home but he was back to flying in space and

Monday 6 August 2018

Spider Flight to New York


Starting with Spider driving in his car to the airport to go to New York and as he was driving he saw The Crazy Car Family and then he was at the airport. There was one more parking and that was for Spider and he parked his car and walked inside the airport and he saw Millions of people walking around the place, people waiting, people talking and people walking and then this happen… “the plane going to New York would take four hours to take flight because they was a problem… Oh I forget to turn it off” and when Spider heard that he thinked of a plan. Firstly he would do the stuff he would have to do and then he would find something to do and that is what he did and when he when he was finish what he was doing he was going to find something to do and a little girl came to him and said “Are you Spider from the book Maxel’s Adventure” she said and Spider said “Yes” he said and she was so excited she talled her mum and dad and her brother and sister but then this happen “The New York plane is ready to take flight so come quick!!” and Spider was ready but the little girl’s family was going too and the mum said “Alasa is crazy but when she was talking to you she was not crazy so can you fly with you”she said but Alasa heard everything and she was hyped and they go on the plane and Spider went to the family’s house and then he went home. The end

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Tuesday 6 March 2018

Empathy writing Hassan

I heard my big brother sobbing.  
I heard his voice trembling.
I saw the bubbling Fanta.
I felt the pain.
I felt the cold bubbling diet coke, that I enjoyed.
I noticed we spent to much, he could not get his fanta.
I noticed the store was very small.
I wondered what should I do for him?
I wondered how I can fix this?

Extra Writing:

If I was in my Brother Shoes i would be in pain

Tuesday 27 February 2018

The Nature Trail

I Heard Birds Tweeting.
I Heard the Branches Falling.
I Saw the Grass Hills.
I Felt the Wind On My Face.
I Felt The Old Leaves.
I Wondered If It was the Old way to go down the hill.
I Wondered, Can people make It Exciting.